http://megsessays.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/descriptive-scene/ ENG 251 - The Personal Essay Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:33:44 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://megsessays.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/descriptive-scene/#comment-3 morganbeth44 Wed, 06 Feb 2008 23:40:37 +0000 http://megsessays.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/descriptive-scene/#comment-3 I really like how you compared the tranquility and sounds of your environment to the ocean. The small details you added to your description really added to the piece and made me come up with a picture of the place in my mind. I really like how you compared the tranquility and sounds of your environment to the ocean. The small details you added to your description really added to the piece and made me come up with a picture of the place in my mind.

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